Anger (French translation)

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English

Anger

Wave, rising slowly
Wall, building rapidly
Wave, cresting perfectly
Wall, crashing perilously
Wave, suffocating gravely
 
Anger overpowers completely
Anger shouts loudly
Anger robs of reason
Anger achieves nothing
Anger helps no one
 
Wave, imagine it gentling
Wall, imagine it crumbling
Wave, dive under surviving
Wall, scale over conquering
Wave, you are floating
 
You control anger
 
Submitted by BlackSea4ever on Mon, 29/10/2018 - 23:28
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French translation

Colère

Une vague qui enfle lentement
Un mur qui monte rapidement
Une vague à son point culminant
Un mur qui s'effondre dangereusement
Une vague qui nous submerge
 
La colère nous envahit
La colère hurle à travers nous
La colère nous rend fous
La colère ne mène à rien
La colère ne sert à rien
 
Imagine la vague qui s'apaise
Imagine le mur qui se défait
Plonge sous la vague et survis
Gravis le mur et triomphe
Tu flottes sur la vague
 
La colère est apprivoisée
 
Submitted by ingirumimusnocte on Sat, 03/11/2018 - 02:19
Author's comments:

I adapted it a bit but hopefully the idea is still there.

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Comments
BlackSea4ever    Thu, 08/11/2018 - 01:56

I trust you, P! I'm humbled you took the time to do all these translation.

ingirumimusnocte    Thu, 08/11/2018 - 05:11

It was quite pleasant. I did adapt this one a bit but I think I didn't betray the meaning too much.
Even GT seems to agree, though for some reason it can't wrap its robotic head around "survis" (survive) Regular smile

BlackSea4ever    Thu, 08/11/2018 - 05:29

when waves are high, it's safer to dive down under the wave rather than get hit by the awesome power

ingirumimusnocte    Thu, 08/11/2018 - 06:49

You're quite the sea expert, I would not have expected less of you Regular smile